Cross-narrator analysis · November 1, 1805

Pounded Salmon and Sea Otters: Three Views of the Cascades Portage

3 primary source entries

The first of November 1805 found the Corps of Discovery hauling baggage and canoes around the Grand Shoot at the Cascades of the Columbia. Three narrators — Sergeant John Ordway, Sergeant Patrick Gass, and Captain William Clark — left entries from this single, frigid day. Read side by side, they reveal not a single event but three calibrated registers of attention: the soldier’s logbook, the carpenter-sergeant’s slightly fuller report, and the captain’s sprawling ethnography.

Parallel Logistics, Diverging Detail

Ordway and Gass produce nearly interchangeable accounts of the morning’s labor. Ordway notes the wind “from the N. E. and cold” and reports that the men “carried all our baggage past the portage,” then took the canoes down and camped “on the Stard Side.” Gass tracks the same sequence but adds a small physiological detail Ordway omits — the men carried baggage “before breakfast as we could not go into the water, without uneasiness on account of the cold.” Both sergeants then mention the arrival of Native traders:

A number of the natives with 4 canoes joined us here from above. Their canoes were loaded with pounded salmon, which they were taking down the river to barter for beads and other articles. (Gass)

a number of Indians with canoe loads of pounded Sammon are going down the River tradeing. they are carrying their loads past the portage with us & their canoes also (Ordway)

The convergence is striking enough to suggest the sergeants were either comparing notes or drawing on a shared oral debrief at camp. Gass, however, specifies the trade goods (“beads and other articles”), a piece of information that Clark will expand into a full paragraph.

Clark’s Ethnographic Expansion

Clark’s entry begins on the same logistical footing — “a verry cold morning wind from N. E” — and he supplies the precise measurement the sergeants lack: the portage “is 940 yards of bad way over rocks & on Slipery hill Sides.” He also records that three canoes were damaged in the haul, a operational fact neither sergeant bothered with. But where Ordway and Gass close their entries with the camp on the starboard side, Clark opens out into observation.

He alone notices the sea otters and his own failed shot:

Great numbers of Sea otters, they are So Cautious that I with deficuelty got a Shute at one to day, which I must have killed but Could not get him as he Sunk

He alone follows the trade chain inland, puzzling over its terminus: “I Can’t lern whether those Indians trade with white people or Inds. below for the Beeds & copper, which they are So fond of.” Where Gass simply names “beads,” Clark traces a regional economy in which pounded salmon moves downriver and beads — “perticularly blue & white” — move back up, eventually exchanged “with Indians Still higher up this river for Skins robes.”

The Captain as Observer of Bodies and Houses

Clark’s entry then becomes one of the most concentrated ethnographic passages in the Columbia journals. He catalogs health (“Sore eyes are Common and maney have lost their eyes”), dental wear (“worn their teeth down, maney into the gums”), posture-related swelling (“Sweled legs, large about the knees,—owing to the position in which they Set on their hams”), dress, ornament, and architecture. He sketches a plank house “about 33 feet to 50 feet Square” with a doorway “30 Inc. high and 16 Inches wide,” and notes carved wooden “imeges” in human form. He describes nose ornaments of white shell “2 Inch long” and the practice of cranial flattening:

all the women have flat heads pressed to almost a point at top The press the female childrens heads between 2 bords when young—untill they form the Skul as they wish it which is generally verry flat. This amongst those people is considered as a great mark of buty

None of this appears in Ordway or Gass. The contrast illuminates the division of journalistic labor in the Corps: the sergeants discharge their duty by recording weather, work, distance, and camp; Clark, freed from the immediate logistics his men are executing, turns observer. His closing remark — that among these peoples “men take more of the drugery off the women than is common with Indians” — is the kind of comparative ethnographic judgment the sergeants neither attempt nor are asked to.

The day at the Grand Shoot thus survives in three resolutions. Ordway gives the line, Gass gives the line with a margin, and Clark gives the page.

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